Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-26103034-20150619152554/@comment-26103034-20150706201012

(I wasn't expecting that

Also, I know I made the same mistake before, but try and keep your posts in the past tense - so it would be Jayara fell on the ground and when... Your changing from past to present)

When she woke up, the stench of rotting meat was overpowering. She was in a small barred off section with a rusted gate blocking her exit, Next to her lay the carcass of a wolf, surrounded by flies.

The archer who'd defeated her was sitting at a table a little way a way, and hadn't seen her wake up yet.