Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-17114085-20150105230328/@comment-25123474-20150106110656

(Better, yes. Though I would like to point out some places that could've needed some commas and some that didn't. But overall, it's better than your old posts. Keep up the good work, Hooded :D)

Rennac suddenly woke up from his slumber. He was doing everything he could to stop himself from screaming. The nightmare that kept having was always the same, though most times it would be about different cities, but it was more or less the same. People screaming, being killed. Women being taken away by the creatures. Then the city would be left to burn. He held his head in both hands, trying to make sense of the continuous nightmare.

'What does it mean!' The Merchant Rogue thought, accidentally letting out a growl of frustration. It only grew louder when the voice suddenly returned, louder than it was yesterday. He took his pack and decided to just fumble with the stuff he had looted from the freaks, just to pass the time until they would get moving again.