Board Thread:Off-Topic/@comment-17114085-20171215205812/@comment-17114085-20180324122935

Dingosnail wrote:

Name: Tiramisu

'''Bio: Tiramisu was a follower of DIO, but he was sent on another mission on the time of DIO’s death. He led a life in the shadows that resulted Tiramisu having to take up jobs revolving around assassinations or death attempts. Each assassination would build up more and more guilt in Tiramisu, but not at the ones he killed but at his absence at DIO’s last moments. This guilt left Tiramisu less and less confident in his way of life, leaving him to the capture of the SPW where he was experimented on with the arrow. He wasn’t killed by the fatal spot the arrow hit, leaving the SPW thinking that he was either lucky or uncapable. He was then incarcerated by the SPW after the testing. His stand began to manifest after he was placed to prison due to his previous crimes, following death row.'''

Wait, so if he supposed to be a protagonist or an antagonist? I don't understand because you had him at odds with the SPW, who are the main antagonists of this RP.

Dingosnail wrote: Name: Misty Mountain Hop

Type: Artificial Humanoid, Long Ranged Power,

'''Appearance:  Misty Mountain Hop consists of multiple patterns and designs on it’s body, along with colored breast armor with cables connecting it to it’s back. Misty Mountain Hops’ body is scattered with bizarre colors. Mounted on its face is a type of helmet that covers its entire head, the front of it is formed to shape like a 7 with a metallic bandana on its neck with cables coming out of the center of it's shoulder-guard. '''

https://i.gyazo.com/85437d21b53e1f4ac92235e9dadd7220.png

Abilities:

'''Misty Mountain Hops’ main ability is to fire a green concentrated beam from the tips of it’s finger, the beam can curve to the will of the user. The concentrated beam is actually apart of Misty Mountain Hops’ finger, the entire body of Misty Mountain Hop can actually shift into the beam, but the beam gets slower as the mass gets heavier.'''

Stats:

Destructive Power: B

Speed: C

Range: B

Durability: D

Precision: A

Developmental Potential: B

So his ability is to shoot lasers that he can then control?

His type, ability and stats kind of contradict each other. If he is a Long Ranged type then his Range Stat should be A. If his Range stat is A then his ability shouldn't be hindered the farther away it gets like in does. His ability gets weakener at longer ranges, so he shouldn't be a Long Ranged type. They don't match. You'll either need to chance how his ability works or his typing and stats.