Board Thread:Off-Topic/@comment-17114085-20171215205812/@comment-17114085-20180202095842

Powerhouse411 wrote:


 * Bio:
 * Ran never knew his father. Until, a month ago, Ran's father was shot with an arrow. The arrow endowed a Stand upon Ran's father and all of his offspring, including Ran.
 * Not long after, through the use of his stand Radiohead, Ran's father contacted Ran. Ran's father explained to Ran that Radiohead allowed him to learn that the Speedwagon Foundation had become corrupt. He then went on to explain that he botched an attempt to foil the SWF's plans and thereby exposed himself as one whom was knowledgeable of the SWF's corruption. Consequently, the SWF's corruptors attempted to have him and his family killed. However, he managed to spirit his wife and son away to a safe house and is now preparing to commence his backup plan to stop the SWF.
 * After explaining all he could to Ran, Ran's father apologized to Ran for never having a proper meeting with him and then begged Ran to save his family if he failed to stop the SWF. A few days later, the connection between Radiohead and Ran went down. As a result, Ran realized that his father was dead and that it was now up to him to save his father's family from the Speedwagon Foundation. So Ran left his grandmother and mother a note about him leaving to attend to important business and then embarked on a journey to save his father's family and maybe even the entire world.

(One suggestion about the Bio to make it very easy to integrate Ran into the story. Make Ran's father a researcher at the Rho Facility. It has one of the arrows inside it, which he could've used on himself to gain a Stand. Plus it allows Ran's father to disclose the location of the secret facility to Ran so he can travel there and meet up with the group at their current location.)

Powerhouse411 wrote:


 * Stand
 * Abilities:
 * Mr. Roboto is a Close-Range Power-Type Stand that can be bound to — and released from — any object that is connected to the internet. Subsequently, as long as the object that Mr. Robot is bound to is both within 2 meters of Ran and is connected to the internet, Mr. Roboto will be able to maniulate the entirety and totality of the World Wide Web. However, in exchange, any damage that is inflicted upon an object that Mr. Roboto is bound to will be reflected upon Mr. Roboto and thereby reflected upon Ran as well.

(Entirety and totality of the Internet? That seems way to excessive, since a lot of things are connected to the internet. I think he should be restricted somewhat in what he can or can't do on the internet. For example: he can't just hack into someone's online bank account and transfer all their money away. What I'm saying is he shouldn't be able to easily hack/bypass high levels of security or firewalls online.)

Powerhouse411 wrote:


 * Stand
 * Abilities:
 * In addition, Mr. Roboto possesses the ability to grow a maximum of 108 usb cords from either itself or the object that it is bound to. Subsequently, Mr. Roboto can either utilize those cords as whips or plug them into an individual — if the individual is NOT an undead whom lacks a neural network to be manipulated — as a means of transferring knowledge and memories from the individual to Ran. Mr. Roboto is also able to plug any of those usb cords into a digital electronic as a means of manipulating the digital electronic.

(Can he control all 108 cords individually?)

Powerhouse411 wrote:


 * Stand
 * Stats
 * Destructive Power: A (USB cords are C-Rank)
 * Speed: A (USB cords are C-Rank)
 * Range: E
 * Durability: E
 * Precision: A
 * Developmental Potential: A

(To many A's in Mister Roboto's stats. It needs some tweaking)