Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-26245872-20141027213346/@comment-25101508-20141031204711

Shiera watched as Adawulf attempted to fight the last two pirates in the water.

"That's one crazy book. It could sell for a nice price," one of the men said.

"I have a plan," Shiera said as she froze Adawulf in the water. The last two pirates dragged the Black Book and began swimming towards the ship and they managed to get on it. The ships escaped. Adawulf wouldn't be able to catch up.

(If you and Kadil are going to kill my minor characters without my permission, what's going to stop me from killing all the Templars and all of Adawulf's guards.

Shouldn't you say:

Adawulf attempted to take the book.)