Board Thread:Non-TES Roleplaying/@comment-17114085-20171215205822/@comment-24530992-20180204165844

Harold Burned-Mane wrote: (You should put his thoughts in italic, makes it easier for us to discern real speech from thoughts.)

Ran's plan didn't work as intended, however. As the loud shrill didn't make Mathew look down. To his enhanced senses the shrill was worse than it would've been to a normal person, especially at that distance. Mathew winced and covered his left ear with his left hand. He moved his head to the side and then grabbed his radio and threw it against the wall, shattering it. The sound had left him disoriented, to the point that he didn't even notice the flying ventilation door coming at him.

The door slamed into the back of his head and caused him to take a step forward. He was bleeding and his hat had been knocked down, but Agent Shepard was still up. Something like that wasn't enough to take him down with all his genetic augmentations, his body was built to take punishment. Though now Ran had drawn his attention away from Shizuka and Marcus and to the ventilation shaft.

"Is that where you're hiding, bastard." He muttered. ''Was my nose wrong? I swore they were somewhere right in front of me. That's where their scent leads to. Tricky bastards that must've been a decoy.''

Shizuka covered her ears when the radio went haywire. She realized that this was their best chance and deactivated Achtung Baby. Everything it had made invisible became visible again. She turned to Marcus. "Now that he's distracted." She whispered.

"Should we take him out or run?" He asked. "We might get sniffed out again. This guy is obviously not human, so I can use my hamon to take care of him."