Board Thread:Off-Topic/@comment-17114085-20171215205812/@comment-17114085-20180201224218

Powerhouse411 wrote:
 * Bio:
 * Ran never knew his father. Until, a month ago, Ran's father was shot with an arrow. The arrow endowed a Stand upon Ran's father and all of his offspring, including Ran. The stand of Ran's father, Ran's younger half-brother, and Ran himself were all the same: Mister Roboto!

(No two Stands are exactly the same unless it's alternate universe counterparts - but even then there are a few differences in abilities like with Killer Queen. At most they have similar appearances or abilities, but not 100% copies of one another.)

Powerhouse411 wrote:
 * Bio:
 * Through the power of their stand, Ran and his father met one another for the first time. Ran's father explained to Ran that the Speedwagon Foundation had become corrupt and that its corruptors had decided that he knew to much. So the Speedwagon Foundation attempted to have him and his family killed. However, he managed to spirit his wife and son away and then procure an arrow out of the hope that the arrow would give him the power to stop the Speedwagon Foundation.

(So Ran's father worked for the Speedwagon Foundation? He'd need to be one of the higher ups or related the Supernatural Division in order to learn about the "corruptors" plans.)

Powerhouse411 wrote:
 * Bio:
 * After explaining all he could to Ran, Ran's father apologized to Ran for never having a proper meeting with him and then begged Ran to save his family if he failed to do so. A few days later, Mister Roboto dropped its connection to Ran's father. As a result, Ran realized that his father was dead and that it was now up to him to save his father's family from the Speedwagon Foundation. So Ran left his mother a note about him leaving to attend to business and then embarked on a journey to save his father's family and maybe even the entire world.

(I quite like this motivation, well done. I'll wait until you finish up the Stand card and Character card before commenting more on it.)