Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-31441413-20170304014059/@comment-31441413-20170304025819

Rukathesoldier wrote: (I don't mean to be rude or anything but there are problems with your premise. You should probably learn more about TES lore. I mean sure you could change the lore to fit your RP but it's usually better to create something that can fit in the existing lore or something that simply adds onto existing lore. The first problem I see is that the liminal barriers prevent a full scale daedric invasion like this so you would have to come up with a good reason/explanation for how it is happening. The second problem is more of a writing issue than a lore issue. You just go immediately from start of invasion to 'only one city left in tamriel' which just seems rushed. You should write about how it got to that point. Add details. The section about the gods has a few problems too. The divines gave up their power to create Nirn. They still have influence over the world but they lack agency. They can't really 'decide to act'. But I'm not so sure how accurate that part is. I'm familiar with the lore but I'm not an expert. Anyway bringing people back from the dead isn't really something the divines tend to do. The divines sort of keep reality working how (we think) it should. For example, Arkay (god of life and death) makes sure things stop living when they should(except when necromancers and daedra get involved and fuck things up.). Just trying to be helpful and inform you as it appears to me that you don't know much about the lore. Knowing more about the source material can make it easier to write good stories. As it is now your's just seems like Oblivion but worse. I don't mean to offend but that's how I see it.) (Hi! I'm not offended or anything I will take any criticism as long as it is helpful advice! It is true I don't know much about TES lore I only know a little but again thanks for your criticism!)