Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-24696651-20150325202139/@comment-5518614-20150628041444

Keyboardkiller75 wrote:

Fraus snapped back to his world. His face covered in snow. He'd stopped rolling to see Lassis battling the Clannfear, which was about to stomp on him. He'd roll away from the Clannfear. He'd get up, rather slowly, and casts a fireball at the back of it. Causing it to stagger forward. (Some weird tense mixing action you got going there!)

The Clannfear was hit by something as it reared up, and staggered forward, colliding with Lassis. The force knocked her backwards, and she stumbled into some rocks, causing her to fall. Her back smacked painfully against a rock, sending jolts of pain through her. She cried out, and rolled to her left, onto the snow. She lay there, breathing short sharp breaths.

(you dun goofed...)