User blog comment:Psychomantis108/Story: Myths of Mundus: Dark Pilgrimage - Chapter 1: Orsimer Charge/@comment-5543592-20150412104209/@comment-3293219-20150412113523

Those were good advice notes, especially number 4, I find that I'm at my best, when I just do what I want really.

To give you a little more context though on why these are terrible advice notes. In regards to the emotional thing? The point of it was that the character was religious and hadn't taken a life before, I explained this in quite a lot of detail as well, pretty much giving the thought process of the character as they eventually break down and surrender, instead of killing their target. I'm not sure how good/bad it was but the guy still completely missed the point of it, either way.

As well, the story was pretty much focussed around the protagonist meeting his match, like Moriarty to Sherlock Holmes or The Master to the Doctor. He was like the anti protagonist, just as powerful and driven, though it was quite obvious which one was the most evil of the two, I still treated them both as protagonists, rather than labelling the obviously evil one as the antagonist.

As much as I and a number of others have tried to make sense of this, somehow I doubt that this is what he meant but it is still something to take on board.