Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-29559990-20150109200212/@comment-29559990-20150121110445

(Billy, allow me to explain. I know that Talnarach is a monster of a man, but you seem to think Borskar is nowhere on Tal's level. That's not the case. When you've got Borskar here, a 6'6 behemoth with adrenaline pumping and emotions running high, I don't care how muscled up you are, he's gonna move you somehow.)

(Also, I understand your trying to do a large reveal for ol' Tal, but I just don't feel like that was the time. I understand the scene you were trying to pull off, but that wasn't the a good time for the scene. The group was descending into anarachy and the best way to end a fire is to end it quickly. You will have your moment with Sibbi, don't worry. Or, you could just move the reveal to a later chapter, hm? Have a bit more build-up?)

(And, I'll be the first to say it: The ending was sloppy. At least, I found it sloppy. Heck, the entire ending was rushed. But, we got it done. And now that we got it done, I'm gonna work my ass off to make the next chapter MUCH better. The wheels were coming off, and I had to shove it to the finish line ASAP.)

"Do what you will, Reachman." Sibbi said. "If you'll direct your attention to the corpse on the ground, you'll see that I've already won."