Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-17114085-20150109114215/@comment-17114085-20150125092856

Darth Hound wrote: Nation Card

Name(If an existing city, use its name): Ald'ruhn

Location(Be very specific if custom): All land within 50 miles of Ald'ruhn

Flag: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/050/b/f/kain__s_clan_symbol_by_chupacabrathing-d4qbrck.png

Ruler: Voljundok (It means Horror King Hound in Dovahzul)

Type of Rule(Republic, Monarchy, Theocracy, Oligarchy, etc.): Stratocracy

Predominant Religion: The Dragon Cult

Predominant Race: Khajiit

Resource(2 max): Ebony, Ivory

Special Unit(Only one, unique to your nation): Legendary Dragon

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Character Card

Name: Voljundok

Race: Khajiit

Gender: Male

Age: 27

Appearance: Charcoal fur, crimson eyes, gray highlights

Armor: http://www.nexusmods.com/skyrim/mods/6085/?

Weapon: http://www.nexusmods.com/skyrim/mods/19611/? All weapons shown in picture

Skills(1 Master, 2 Expert, 3 Adept): Master One-hand, Expert Heavy Armor, Expert Archery, Adept Conjuration, Adept Restoration, Adept Alchemy

Spells(Max 8): Close Wounds, Firebolt, Summon Wrathman, Vampire's Bane, Greater Ward, Stendarr's Aura, Lightning Storm

Powers(Racial + 1 more max): Night Eye, Root of Power

Personality/Traits(at most 6 traits, must have 2 bad traits): Cold, calculating (I count this as 50/50 pos-neg), humorous, resourceful, creative, dark

Bio: (Do I need to make a bio? I have one ready to go, but it's lengthy and OP-ish..)

I also have a NationState- http://www.nationstates.net/nation=voljundok (Ok, obviously you're going to have to change things. First off, Ald'ruhn is in the middle of Vvardenfell. So it is inhabitable due to ash. Secondly you can't have Legendary Dragons as your special units. Dragons don't exist anymore. They were all killed off by either the Dragonborn or the Blades way back in the 4th Era, countless years ago. Thirdly that image has like 8 weapons, you can't possibly use all those. Fourthly, your character doesn't have destruction as one of his main skills, thus he can only have the basic Flames spell. Finally, yes, a Bio is one of the sections so you should make one. And FYI even a bit of OPness is not acceptable.

Also, I've made a new part since yesterday. So don't post on part 2 anymore....)